Great job, Hughes!!!
Every now and then, I visit this site and I ma always impressed by what you did here.
You are kind to give compliments but you are the one who deserves them... Well done, my friend. Well Done.

It's hard for me to have an objective look at this Short-Film for obvious resons... However, the cinematography is rich in details and very engaging. You want to see what image will be coming up next. It looks very professional. The sound quality, lighting, background are awesome. My positive criticism would be, work on props, wardrobe. The acting needs to be a lot more fluid. More like a dance. Perhaps more practice will do. Other than that, I love it. And most importantly, people I show the Short to are very impressed and they really like it.
Mrs. Maragos looks great on film.

Hmm, film cuts off too soon, didn't get a chance to pick up on character or plot. But you have really nice camera angles, and shots. Kudos!